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Thursday, April 14, 2016
April 14, 2016
| Posted by
Mark R Morris Jr
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Copyright 2016
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Mark R. Morris Jr.
The constant whir and beep of machines had turned into a kind of lullaby and Cara was giving in to it. Her head dropped to her chest and as her arm relaxed, the top-of-the-line tablet, with all the bells and whistles her fiancée prized so highly, slid dangerously close to the edge of her lap and a two-foot drop onto a solid tile floor.
Ping!
Cara stirred and caught the tablet. She looked toward the
hospital bed where her fiancée, Lance had been laying in a coma for thirty-four
days now. Nothing had changed. She looked around the room for the source of the
noise.
Ping!
The tablet. She thumbed across the screen to bring it back
to life, someone had messaged her on Facebook.
Patricia Leeson- I
think it’s great that you are keeping up with Lance’s account, while he’s
under. It’s almost like he’s here, laughing at our jokes!
Cara’s brow wrinkled, she hadn’t added anything to Lance’s
account except a post to let everyone know what was going on. She’d been
replying to comments there and leaving a new update every day in the comments.
Maybe that was it.
Cara Miller- Sure, I
felt like you guys deserved to know what was going on.
Cara had met Patricia numerous times, she was a receptionist
at the D As office where Lance worked as a prosecuting attorney. It was comforting
to know they were thinking about him.
Patricia Leeson- Yes,
and reading our posts and adding his reactions is really a nice touch. Had me
in tears today.
What? That was impossible. Cara clicked into his account,
she hadn’t done anything like that. She found account activity and thumbed down
through the list. Wow. Someone must have Lance’s password besides her, he’d
reacted to over 100 posts in the last 30 days. Weird. Then she noticed a little
icon at the bottom of the screen, “Massplanner”, she clicked it. This would
explain it, Lance had set up a social media automator, pshew, no one had hacked
into her comatose fiance’s social media.
Cara Miller- Not me,
must be automated.
Patricia Leeson- Well,
if so, that’s an automation system I need. Made me laugh so hard!
Cara was awake now, so she logged into her own account and
read a few posts. She replied to her mom and shared an article from a friend
filled with miracle coma stories of people who completely recovered. She looked
at Lance, her vision clouded with tears.
I just miss him
so much…she typed, then hit send.
The tablet buzzed lightly. She looked down. Someone had already loved her post,
she clicked the icon and Lance’s profile pic came up. The room swam just a
little, Cara’s ears were filled with the sound of her own pulse and she could
feel her throat close in. What was happening?
Someone does have his
password! She thought. How else is
that happening? There’s no way that was automated. Cara picked up her phone
and called Rick, Lance’s best friend. If anyone knew what was going on it would
be him.
When Rick arrived, Cara was up, pacing the room. She’d added
four new status updates since calling him and Lance’s profile had responded to
each of them, it was really starting to freak her out.
“He’s just laying there!” she sobbed, when Rick walked in,
“And some asshole is out there, pretending to be him! This is sick, Rick, this
is really messed up!”
Rick gently hugged Cara, the two of them had been friends
since childhood and had dated briefly in ninth grade, until they decided two
kids both with braces should never kiss, to prevent locking, and he’d
introduced her to Lance.
“Okay, where’s the Ipad?” he asked.
Cara indicated the adjustable rolling table, where she had
placed it after finally turning it off. Rick turned the tablet on and it
whirred repeatedly, “Whoa! Whoever it is must have seen me come in here! Now,
they’re reacting to my posts, all of them, for like the past two days. Okay,
here’s what I’m going to do. Let me screen capture all of this, then we’re
changing the password. We will get to the bottom of who this is, but first,
you’re a mess we got to get this to stop!”
“Thank you! I was afraid if I did that they couldn’t figure
it out,” Cara said.
Lance smiled, he worked IT for the cyber crimes division of
the state police, “Well, because of who Lance is, I can pull some strings at
Facebook and get it tracked back to an IP address. We’ll know pretty shortly.
I’ve already got someone working on it.” Rick sat down in a chair, connected a
keyboard to the tablet and continued to talk as he worked. “Other than this,
how are things going? Doctor’s said he was healing well. Any word on when
Sleeping Beauty might wake up?”
“No. It’s infuriating, every time I mention something I
think is a sign, they just downplay it and say he’ll wake up when his brain is
ready, or he won’t,” Cara sighed.
“Okay, set the password you want, then, let’s do this, why
don’t you log into your account and change your status? Just to make sure that
solves the problem and I will find whoever is responsible. Hopefully someone we
know who’s just going through it with us and made a dumb choice,” Rick said.
Cara took the Ipad and tapped in a new password. Then,
tapped in her own password. Glad to have
Rick here to help out. She hit enter and nothing happened. She held her
breath, but after a full minute, no reaction had been registered.
Rick stood, keys in hand, ready to head back to work, “Well,
hopefully that will take care of it, even if it was the automation, that should
stop it.” He hugged Cara and moved to the door, “I’ll let you know when we
figure it…” Ping
Cara and Rick both froze, then Cara reached out with a
trembling hand and picked up the Ipad. There, blinking in navigation bar was a
single notification, she clicked it.
Lance Arnett has
reacted to your status.
“Um, Cara, look…” Rick pointed to Lance in the bed. His
position hadn’t changed, except that his right hand was turned into a thumb’s
up sign. “Ha, what’s going on there, Lance? He’s messing with us, right?
Lance?”
Cara reached out and touched Lance’s cheek, there was no
response, he seemed to still be completely out of it. She looked at the
monitor, which she had studied for hours every day since his ‘accident’ and
everything appeared exactly the same as it had. But, there it was, a thumbs up,
and his response to the status had been a ‘like’ symbolized by a raised
thumb. As she watched, his thumb folded
back down slowly and his hand rested on the bed cover.
“What the hell?” Cara felt as if the oxygen had been sucked
from the room.
“Maybe we should call the doctor?” Rick suggested.
“No, no way. They’ll just downplay it, I’m telling you, it’s
awful. Try it again,” she said, holding the Ipad out to Rick.
“Why me?” Rick hesitated.
“Because I am terrified, please?” She shook the Ipad, Rick
reluctantly accepted it.
He set the Ipad down and typed in a message. Lance’s thumb
went up, followed by a ping from the
device. Rick typed again, again, thumbs up. Again, this time, the corners of
Lance’s mouth went down and the reaction was a teary eyed emoticon.
“Oh, my, God,” Cara smiled, “He’s in there, he knows what’s
going on!”
“Yeah, but how does he know what I’m putting on Facebook?”
Rick set the tablet down and stepped away from it. “I’m going to go now.” And
with that, he walked out the door.
Cara looked after him, but didn’t leave. She picked up the
tablet and started typing. She posted questions, Are you in pain? Lance smiled and a laughing emoticon appeared in
the comment box. Can you wake up? Anger
Have you been hearing me the whole time? Thumbs
up
Cara went on like this for about an hour, smiling, laughing.
When the nurse came in for vital’s check, Cara said nothing. About three hours
later there was a knock at the door.
“Come in,” Cara said.
Rick entered the room, “I, uh, brought someone that might
help,” he said. “Sorry I left in such a hurry, this whole thing is kind of
freaking me out. This is my aunt, Delia. She’s, uh, sensitive to stuff like
this”
A tiny, dark skinned woman stood in the door, looking
apprehensive.
“Um, hello, Delia,” Cara said, taking the woman’s hand.
“Sensitive? You mean, like a psychic?”
“No, not psychic, not sensitive, just old,” Delia said
sharply, “This him?”
She walked to the bed and touched Lance’s hand, which
immediately curled into a thumb’s up.
“Help with what, Rick?” Cara asked.
“Finding out what really happened to him,” Rick said, “Who
did this.”
“It was an accident,” Cara said, “I don’t think I like where this is going. We’ve
been over it.”
“The official story just didn’t make sense, Cara, he fell
off of a ladder? In the middle of an organized crime investigation, one where
he was personally threatened?” Rick said.
“Rick, you weren’t there! When I found him, he was in the
middle of the garage, on his back, with the back of his head bashed in and no
pulse! Why else would the ladder have been there? Why else would the attic be
open?” Cara sobbed, “I just think we should be grateful he’s communicating.”
“Cara, I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to upset you. I think we
should talk to the doctors, though and let them know what we saw,” Rick
suggested.
Cara wiped her eyes, “Okay, could you just give me a minute,
to get myself together?”
“You have a dark secret, girl. Very dark,” the old woman
said, as Rick led her from the room and closed the door behind him.
Cara walked to the door and listened briefly, then moved
quickly to her bag, on a seat by the window on the far side of the bed. She
reached in and came out with a large, empty syringe, “Sorry, baby,” she said,
unhooking a line from Lance’s saline drip. “I can’t have you sharing what you
know.”
Cara pulled back the plunger on the syringe and fitted it to
the line, “Goodbye, Lance, I really did love you.” She said, pressing the
plunger home.
Lance suddenly set up, his eyes flew open, “Cara!” He
yelled, Cara jumped back from the bed, but it was too late, the monitor
squealed and Lance appeared to seize as the embolism did its work. Cara took a
deep breath, refitted the line to the saline drip and dropped the syringe into
the red biohazards box on the wall, before moving to the door.
“Help! I need help, he was waking up, but then…” Cara
allowed a nurse to push past her, an evil grin coming turning up the corner of
her mouth. “Rick, he came to, for a minute, then…”
Rick rushed into the room, while his aunt stopped, faced
Cara and pointed.
“Shut up, bitch, breathe one word of what you think you know
and you’re precious Rick is next,” Cara whispered. She walked to the end of the
hall and found a seat in the ICU waiting area, as much as she wanted to flee,
it would look far too suspicious. She’d worked too long to gain his trust, find
out what he knew, subvert his case, then lay this trap. If only he’d stayed
dead.
Twenty minutes later Rick came down the hall slowly, from
the look on his face, it was over. She masked her relief with a loud sob, “NO!
No, it’s not fair! It’s not fair!” As she stood from her seat, Rick wrapped his
arms around her and over his shoulder, she glimpsed Delia, a slight grin on her
face. What could that woman be smiling about. She’d won.
The doctors had warned her repeatedly of the risk of
embolism in Lance’s case, that’s where she’d gotten the idea. They’d never
suspect a thing, and even if they did, what evidence did they have?
“Can I see him, just for a minute? To say goodbye?” Cara
asked, Rick nodded. The doctors and nurses had vacated the room, the monitor
was gone and Lance’s body lay still in the bed. She walked into the room,
leaned over the bed and whispered into his now deaf ear, “I win.”
Ping
Cara reflexively looked down at the Ipad in her hand a
single notification, it was nothing. But the timing… she had to look.
You’ve been tagged in
a post.
She clicked on the notification and pulled up the status.
There was a short post and a series of comments.
Rick Jackson- Did you
know your killer? @Cara Wilson
PING
Lance Arnett has
reacted to a post you’re tagged in.
THUMBS UP
On the bed, Lance’s dead right hand, slowly formed into a
thumb’s up.
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Wednesday, April 13, 2016
April 13, 2016
| Posted by
Mark R Morris Jr
|
Copyright 2016
All rights reserved
Mark R. Morris Jr.
Ardy Schaeffer stepped down from the shuttle; the ground was surprisingly familiar, with a pungent spring-like aroma of growing things. She had not expected that. She was on special assignment from the blog desk of the Universal Courier, and Moon Colony Orion would be her home for the next 24 hours. She looked up.
She’d been warned in her briefing, not to expect views of earth from this point, but high above her head; the crystalline carbonite dome did a remarkable impression of an earth sky, lighted evenly from horizon to horizon in a pale blue. She knew, from the vidscenes she’d watched the night before, that just on the other side of that inches-thick, nanobot-constructed shield, the vast gulf of infinite space spread out in all directions.
An officious looking man, just a little shorter than Ardy was moving aggressively up the gangplank, his hand outstretched to shake, about three steps before he arrived. She thought about removing her glove, but decided she shouldn’t take any chances on bringing home a plague of some sort. It was the moon, after all, you never knew.
“Ms. Schaeffer, we are so pleased to have you here, welcome to Orion. Today, we’ll be giving you a tour of our A I labs, and you’ll get to meet a few of the students who are preparing for the next hop. I’m Arthur Funke, headmaster of Deep-Space Academy. I’m in charge of testing new A Is to see where they’ll fall in our training program. I am authorized to provide you with the answers to every question.”
Arthur took her hand, much gentler than she had expected and lifted it just a bit, bowing his head toward her slightly, and for one awkward moment, she though he intended to kiss it, before he let it go and spun on his heel. He looked at her expectantly, her cue to follow; she assumed. Ardy reached into her shoulder bag and pulled out a soft covered notepad and pen. She was hopelessly old fashioned, but she loved the feel of pen on pages.
Truth be told, it was all about crossing things out. It gave her a sense of power to edit with a pen, as if she were issuing death sentences to a sentence or two that didn’t quite meet her very high standard. Then, of course, it would all be digitized, everything was. Had been for almost a hundred years.
“Oh, I wasn’t aware that paper was still allowed,” Arthur stammered, looking at her notebook, suspiciously.
This was another reason Ardy preferred paper, harder to make disappear. Through the years more than a few of her stories had turned to so much binary dust before reader's eyes had been laid on them. With paper, they’d at least have to pry it out of her grasp before they could do that.
Ardy smiled, in what she thought was a reassuring way, but came across as slightly smug, “It’s hemp paper, a rapidly renewable byproduct of the medical industry these days.”
Arthur sighed, if not satisfied, he was at least resigned to allow her this little idiosyncrasy. They walked down the ramp and onto a pathway that appeared to be made from modular pads. They reminded Ardy of sidewalks she had seen as a young girl in old cities of the East Coast of what was then the North American States.
Arthur kept up a brisk pace as he led her past a series of low, domelike structures, each with its own path, branching off from the wider one they were on. It gave the impression of walking through the campus of a modern school back on earth, a green lawn, and some infant trees filled the area between buildings, and young students could be seen moving about. As they passed the third dome structure, the path took a turn to the left, and behind the dome and just past the edge of a large rocky outcropping, stood a larger structure, more traditional in its architecture.
Large windows covered the front, stretching up what must have been three stories. A wide set of low stairs, with a large portico above, supported on curving brackets that ran back to the face of the building, shielded the landing at the top of the stairs from the “Sky Light” that Ardy had noticed was decidedly warmer than she had first realized.
Arthur gestured to the building, “This is the hub of our whole operation; the A I birthing center. It started as a lab, but has grown into so much more.” They had reached the bottom step, and he paused, looking up, “It always gives me a rush to come here. I live on the other side of the colony, so I don’t make it over as often as I would like.”
He smiled, small crinkles folding up around his eyes. Ardy also noticed a touch of grey at his temples, something that only the oldest humans had these days, given the nutritional consistency of their diets and genetic rejuvenation regimens that could keep a human healthy for up to 200 years.
When they reached the top of the stairs, a tall glass door slid open silently, and Arthur gestured for her to go ahead of him, then followed into a large atrium, filled with so many plant species, Ardy couldn’t guess how many there were. “This is the most protected space for starting new plants, so, our horticulture teams use this as a sort of greenhouse. A lot of these plants will be moved out into the colony soon. Plants are our most valuable resource. We have enough plant life now to replace about 70% of our oxygen, and we intend to be able to take our oxygen scrubbers offline by sometime next year.”
Arthur crossed the atrium and stepped into a waiting lift. The doors closed and Ardy was surprised to feel the car dropping, instead of the upward motion she had expected. “We’ll start our tour in the embryonics room, which we’ve placed underground. It’s rare, but we do get the occasional meteor shower and having these protected in case of dome breaches is essential. This whole facility is powered by a solar array that stays in orbit above us on a tether. We have a large, bio-diesel generator that hasn’t been run since a year after the colony was launched.”
The lift stopped dropping, and they stepped out into a dimly lighted corridor with glossy white ceiling and floor. The walls were lined with large glass panels, with laboratories and nurseries stretching back behind them.
Arthur stopped before a door just a few steps down the corridor. “Now, I am afraid I will have to insist that you put on a paper gown and booties in these spaces. We can’t be too careful,” he smiled and handed Ardy a plastic wrapped package, containing a simple paper gown and elastic topped paper booties from a box on the wall.
He took an identical package himself and sat on a bench, protruding from the wall, to slip the shoe covers on, then stood and pulled the gown down over his neat suit. Ardy followed his example. They walked through the door into a glass hall, with a glass ceiling that extended back from the main corridor, past another door and into the lab. As they passed each door, cool jets of air pulsed around them to decontaminate their clothing and thin green lines, scanned across their bodies, before the next door opened with a ding.
It was all a part of the elaborate security put in place to provide a sterile environment inside the lab. Ardy was intrigued by all of the technology, although, nothing she hadn’t seen, this much all in one place was a new experience. She wondered if she would be able to get the answer she really came for. She was sure Arthur suspected her ulterior motive, after all, it wasn’t typical for a reporter to come all the way from Allied New Jersey to see all of this first hand. It was common for drones to record these types of interviews remotely, allowing the reporter to see what they needed without making complicated trips to the moon. Even now that it was a daily occurrence, there were still risks involved, not to mention the cost.
“I think you’re going to like this next part. On the left, we have our mech A I unit. On that table, you can see a frame being measured for skin. The mech frames “grow” with the A I, then every four years, they’re brought in to get a larger frame and their cortex is transplanted into a new body, identical to the last one.” Arthur indicated a titanium skeleton, being adjusted by a technician. It was laid out on a stainless steel slab, that hovered, waste high, on an electromagnetic rail system that allowed the table to be moved through the various stages of assembly and finally, into an operating room, where the “brain” from the artificial intelligence bot was transferred into the new body.
“How do you achieve growth in the skeletal system, and why is that necessary?” Ardy asked, busily taking notes on everything she saw. She noticed that as Arthur spoke, he focused on the thing he was talking about, only briefly glancing at Ardy from time to time. The more she could keep him talking, the freer she was to observe things without him noticing.
“That’s a great question. Each major ‘bone’ in our skeletons is designed to expand at a steady, microscopic rate, with an internal piston. It’s set to replicate the growth of a healthy, average human body. The skin, actually generates cells, as it stretches over the skeleton, the muscles grow in much the same way they would in a normal homosapien system, all powered, of course, by an ultra-low voltage battery system. We can then remove the skin, with all of its developed anomalies, such as scars, etc., and install it on the next size skeleton, so that the A I doesn’t really experience any change.”
Arthur looked up and smiled, catching Ardy, curiously staring at a label on a tall, boxed-in cart near the back of the lab. Ardy hastily looked away. The cart was labeled “brain trays” and Ardy’s pulse quickened. She might just have found exactly what she was looking for.
Her mind was busily hatching a plan to return to the lab without an escort. It seemed easy enough. For all the biological protections, there didn’t seem to be any real security protocol to prevent access. Why would there be? After all, anyone approaching Orion could be seen for hours and gaining access to their space port required background and security checks. They felt secure already here.
“Um, yes,” she was flustered, and it was obvious he could see it, “That’s amazing. I had an A I classmate when I was young, but they were much more robotic then. We called her AL; she was an Alpha Ventura, one of the first autonomous A Is. I just get a bit sentimental when I think about it.” She consulted her notes, “So tell me about mem-seeding. I understand that your latest mechs have actual human memory strands implanted in their cortices.”
Arthur watched her more closely now. His eyes narrowed, “Whatever it is you think you’ll find here; it doesn’t exist. I’ll gladly reveal all of our secrets, but I want to state, for the record, you won’t find any of the ‘slave brains’ and other nonsense that gets spread around. Everything here is completely above board. All of our original participants were volunteers.”
“Right, duly noted. You were going to tell me about mem-seeds,” Ardy smiled her most brilliant, disarming smile, “You are by far the cutest tour guide I’ve had in a while, by the way.” It worked, it always worked, a small smile played against the corners of Doctor Arthur Funke’s mouth, then spread to his eyes, “Well, thank you.” He was more than a little flustered. Ardy knew, that even at ninety-five, she still had it. Of course, ninety-five wasn’t what it used to be. She looked more like the fortieth birthday pictures of her grandmother, than those of her great grandmother at the age she was now.
“Mem seeds were my invention. Make sure you include that in your story,” Arthur Funke puffed his chest out just a bit, “We noticed our first generation mechs were having difficulty reconciling their identities as A I. When they eventually discovered that they were, the fact that they had no early childhood memories seemed to be the thing they focused on, and some even attempted to download themselves.”
Ardy’s ears perked up, downloading was the A I equivalent to suicide. There was no real way to shut down an A I cortex, the kernel was nearly indestructible, but their memories could be wiped clean, downloaded into a computer large enough that the various parts of their identity got separated, lost consciousness and the cortex returned to its original blank state.
“We have an incredibly diverse bank of human memories. In the early days of A I development, we were paying anyone that would sit still to download memories. We basically could make a copy of an entire human life, from that person’s perspective in a matter of hours. So, I thought, why not cherry pick a few of those early memories and install them in a mech? It worked wonders. Even once they discovered their mechanical nature, the memories gave them something to hold onto, for them, that memory was just as real as yours or mine.”
Arthur opened the door into another lab, on the right. “Okay, now this is the most exciting part of what we do, right here!” he got excited, like a kid on Christmas. “I’m going to show you something that no one from earth has ever seen.” They walked through a darkened room, through a door labeled simply, 'BIO' and into another, along one wall, were rows of glass panels, each, leading into a tank, filled with a murky fluid. Arthur walked up to the tanks and stood watching.
Ardy joined him and the two stood, staring blankly at the cloudy liquid filled tanks for what felt like minutes, “What am I seeing here?” Ardy finally asked. “Just wait,” Arthur replied. Ardy turned her attention back to the tanks, and as she did, a sudden motion caught her eye, floating up to the glass in a tank eye level with her was what looked like a tiny, human face!
Ardy Schaeffer, who had covered the Abortion Wars of 2052, who had seen every kind of human depravity, from prisons, to the “Super Ghettos” that stretched along the low lands of the lower Mississippi delta, where former Muslim internment camps had turned into an outlaw haven for every kind of racist and bigot imaginable, jumped.
“Oh, wow, is this,” she looked at Arthur, “This is biogenic AI, isn’t it?”
Arthur smiled, “Yes, we call them bios.”
“So, you’ve gotten past the conception stage?”
Ardy turned back to the tank. “Oh, we’ve done much more than that. We have units in every stage of development, you passed some coming in here. Totally autonomous, genetically blank, cortically engineered, artificial intelligence.”
“You mean human cloning?” Ardy said, darkly. Even after all of these years, the idea was still looked on with suspicion.
Arthur Funke looked shocked, “No! We wouldn’t dream of it. Those experiments were a disaster. The human psyche can never be separated from its genetic material on that level. Creating a copy of a living human being is the creation of a monster, pure and simple. No, this is nothing like that. They are not human. They look, breathe, eat, sleep, bleed, even, but they are so much more than human. We discovered that if they grew from embryos and developed naturally, they could develop normal human memories, which made their cortices much more stable. Even the twelve year old units can mentally outperform our most advanced mechs.”
“But, we have proof, and your cart back there, what are ‘brain trays’? We know what you’re up to and I will expose you. We know you’ve been stealing human consciousness and resurrecting the dead's memory, doctor.” Ardy was indignant, she’d caught him and he was still denying it.
“Nonsense, follow me,” Doctor Arthur Funke marched back through the darkened room they had passed, opened the door into the first lab they had observed and straight over to the cart. He unbuckled one side panel and rocked it open on its hinges. As he did, the interior lit up with a soft, blue glow and there, on something that looked like antique baking trays, were row after row of tiny, human brains, all connected by wires and tubes to a bank of circuits and pumps at the rear of the cart.
“These are the brains we use. They’re genetically neutral. They’re grown from a synthetic protein and programmed, just like any computer. This is the ‘horrible’ thing we’ve done. We’ve recreated life, real life.”
Ardy’s polite facade crumbled, “But, we found you out. You were at the bottom of it. Not this, not this, this is amazing, a bit creepy perhaps, but this is not all you’ve been up to,” she laughed, “we have you dead to rights, Doctor Funke, I have hours of recorded interviews with someone that escaped one of your slave ships. And there were hundreds, perhaps thousands of the brightest minds taken from earth under the pretense that the planet was finished. We know what you’re up to, re-engineering the human race on the smartest and best, all without their consent. I have video footage of rows of cryo chambers, all filled with your kidnap victims. What do you have to say about that?”
Arthur Funke stood calmly and listened to Ardy’s rant, then quietly he said, “Ms. Schaeffer, you are welcome to investigate every inch of this colony. Nothing is off limits. I suspect what your friend encountered was a bad reaction to a cryo-sleep experiment, that had nothing to do with me, but was completely volunteer. I was one of those volunteers. It was just as you describe. I was under for six months at one point, all to determine the effects. But, I assure you, none of those people are here and none of them participated against their will or without their knowledge. No one is here against their will and none of what your source shared with you is true. Please, I’ll take you anywhere you want to go, open every door.”
And so he did. Ardy messaged back to earth to extend her stay for two more days. She poked into every broom closet in the colony, certain she would find something. She was allowed full, unaccompanied access to the colony library and digital archives. She spoke with mech and bio Ais, and at every level the story checked out. There was not a single document her security clearance wouldn’t open.
She’d been wrong, for the first time in her life, she’d been so sure about it, so ready to expose this monster, but everything she was turning up confirmed every word of his story. Even her editor, who always pushed for further investigation, was begging her to give up and come home. He promised her the moon colony story would be landing page material, top of the fold.
Finally, after three days without sleep, Ardy Schaeffer conceded. She was exhausted and she felt a horrible burden of guilt for having accused Doctor Funke, who by all accounts may have been developing the science that one day saves the human race. It was time for her to go home and lick her wounds, possibly even consider retirement. The moon was nice, maybe she’d move here, she’d heard there were retirement communities even nicer than Orion.
As Ardy boarded the shuttle, she looked back out onto the peaceful green grass and now budding trees. The even, blue, sky dome, glowed brightly, then, flickered. In a section that appeared to be about twice the size of her head, a crack appeared, the area darkened, momentarily, giving her a glimpse past the dome and there, in that brief instant, as the nano-bot repaired the damage, Ardy Schaeffer saw something that made her blood run cold, it was the moon.
Not the surface of the moon, as might be expected, if a mountain were nearby, an entire moon, and there, behind it, looming large, was a globe she did not recognize. It was mottled brown and green, nothing like the images of earth from space she’d seen throughout her life. Then, just as suddenly, the sky dome returned to its brilliant blue and Ardy’s stomach dropped into a hardened knot as she slipped from consciousness.
“Man, have you been watching the feed from Exxon 349?” George Hamlin, asteroid pilot said, around a bite of synthetic ham sandwich. “That reporter chick has some really crazy visits.”
Phil Miller, pilot’s mate crawled out from beneath a nearby console, deposited a wrench in the hovering tool tray near him and plopped back into his seat, “Naw, but my wife says that was really something.”
The large view-screen above the pilot’s controls gave them a view from their rocket platform, out over the asteroid, across the sky-blue of the Orion colony’s dome toward Zeus, their new home world. George and Phil were Gen3 and both had grown up on the bridge of this rocket platform, learning to steer the asteroid, containing humanity’s last hope across the galaxy, propelled by hemp rocket fuel, the colony had been in route now for over one hundred, twenty years and was scheduled to arrive in just a few weeks.
“So, how does that happen anyway? Aren’t all those old timers down for the count until we get there?” Phil asked.
George snorted, “My mom says they should be. She’s a nurse over there in the cryo-sleep ward bottom side. But, they have to let them out every now and then to stretch their legs and the easiest way to keep them from losing their shit is to feed some story line into their holo-dream generators. I guess it’s like lucid dreaming, they tell them they’re going to Orion, they let them out and play along with whatever, but the sleeper invents the rest. I heard a guy from Mobile 234 commandeered a gun ten years back, in like 2196, blew a hole in the dome and nearly sucked everyone out.”
Phil laughed and popped the top on a cold soda, “Man, I’ll be so glad when we get there and have some real land under our feet. This human cargo is crazy, makes me glad to be bio.”
“Yeah,” George agreed and held out a fist, which Phil bumped, “They’re letting that president guy out for his visit tomorrow. That ought to be good for a few laughs.” George punched a button on the console in front of him and music filled the bridge of the rocket platform. George liked oldies.
And I think it’s gonna be a long, long time, ‘til touchdown brings me round again to find, I’m not the man they think I am at home, oh no, no, no, I’m a rocket maaaaaan…
He punched another button and picked up a mic, “This one’s for you mom, over there ‘bottom side’ dealing with the cargo.” And the soothing sounds of Elton John echoed through the cryo-sleep ward as Jody Hamlin, Gen2 charge nurse, adjusted the pressure in the pillow ring surrounding Ardy Schaeffer’s head, reconnected her neural wiring harness and checked her vitals, before closing the pod for the last time.
She glanced at the date clock, counting down the seconds since Ardy’s initial interment, 123 years, 6 months, 5 days, 7 minutes and 36 seconds. That was a hell of a long time to be held hostage. Jody walked down the long line of cryo-sleep pods. There were over 600 of them in the Exxon ward and there were seven more wards just like it, all nestled down here on the underside of the asteroid, all filled with the brightest minds that earth, circa 2076 had had to offer.
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Tuesday, April 5, 2016
April 05, 2016
| Posted by
Mark R Morris Jr
|
Michael Cain in his book, Acting in Film, said something to
the effect that if you can imagine yourself doing something other than acting
with your life, you should do it. I don’t think he meant becoming a writer, but
when I left teaching theater, that’s exactly what I did. Consequently, I suffer
from an overabundance of personal confidence and a coinciding lack of cash from
time to time.
Spending two decades crawling around inside some of the best stories in American literature as a theatrical director, however, has given me some unique perspectives on how it all works and one of the things I think I learned a bit about is characters and how to make them tick. My approach is a bit simpler and comes from an almost reverse angle to most of what gets taught.
When you download a “character generation” sheet online,
doubtless it starts with the pertinent details, like name, height, hair color,
eyes, build, habits… the list goes on and almost all of it is 100% useless when
it comes to really imagining what a character will do and say. So, where should
a writer begin? As with almost everything in writing, there is no one right
answer to that.
As with almost everything in writing, there is no one right answer to that.
In fact, there are often as many different answers as there
are tradespeople plying our craft, but I discovered one way in my acting
coaching that seemed to work almost universally for getting inside the head of
a character and making them believable. It works on a very basic principle of
human behavior. In our daily lives we almost never think about why we
are doing what we do. Motivation almost never enters our conscious thought,
except in a symbolic way from time to time to remind us.
What does preoccupy us to a large extent, however, is what
we hope to achieve by what we are doing. This is true from eating breakfast (I
want to be full) to robbing a bank (I want to take the money) and it dictates a
huge amount of behavior and informs the majority of our decisions and choices
in almost every circumstance. Think about it, when you think through the
unpleasant things you need to do today,
how often do you think of why?
So, what do we think about?
Instead, you think that it will be worth it, you focus, not
on your motivation (what drives you from behind) but on your objective (that
target that is pulling you on) and on the multiple mini-objectives it takes to
get there. This is why goals are so powerful for so many of us.
So, how does this work in building characters? I can only
tell you how I do it. I start with figuring out what my character wants out of
life. In most stories, this gets completely interrupted by the inciting
incident and morphs into something else, but as it changes, your character
still needs a clear idea of what they want in each scene. It can be
anything, but a character who wants
nothing has no impetus to continue the story and probably leaves your audience
wondering whether they want to continue reading.
Once I have an overarching objective, I put my character
into a world with other characters who also have objectives they have to work
with, around and through, to achieve their goal. Almost never do my characters
pause to think about why they are following their objective. They focus
on what they want.
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